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*CLAC*

The sound of a ceramic plate hitting the concrete made you quickly open your eyes. With a still blurry vision, you tried to breathe in and out, but regretted it immediately; the smell of dried blood instantly made you nauseous. Wait.. Blood? That when you finally remembered that day. Those two bitches, the chase, the pain and the blood.. And then, that broken voice. ''Go to sleep'', it said. It sounded like a dying old man's last words, or like a corpse's first breath.

- Eat.

You flinched at the sound of this voice. That's the voice you heard before fainting; that corpse-ish one. As the right side of your vision started to get clearer, you could finally take a look at your suroundings; cold, grey concrete with small holes and odd stains everywhere. You looked up to the only source of faint light you could see; an old lamp loosely hung to the ceilling -which was made of nothing but cement- that could fall at any moment. As you turned your head, you saw a what looked like a man. Thanks to the back light, you couldn't see his face, clothes, or anything else than a tall figure for that matter.

- Eat.

The voice became obviously more agressive. You looked down to see a plate, in which was lying a pece of meat. Don't picture a good looking piece of steak, here; it was a simple piece of possibly wasted meat from which was oozing an almost opaque yellow liquid. But, with that more than empty stomach you had, you could've had swallowed pretty much anything, to be honest. With misery, you slowly crawly towards the plate until you could reach the piece of 'food' without feeling too much pain. You whimpered as you stretched your badly bruised arm to took a hold of the.. thing, and, with difficulty, bit into it as you heard a chuckle. You spit it out as soon as you tried to chew it; you couldn't taste anything but the liquid. It was, somewhat, sour and bland at the same time. It was the most disgusting thing you've ever tasted, for sure. As you finished to throw up, you heard footsteps going to the opposite direction of yours. You wiped the last drop of bile from your lips before quickly raising your head. Before the shadow could reach the door it was walking towards, you let you a weak scream.

- T-thanks.

The humanoïd stopped walking, still as silent as possible.

- I mean, f-for saving me.. Thank you.

...

Silence. Still this madening silcence. You let your half-blurred vision rest on the shadow, hoping.. Hoping for what, exactly? Did you really want him to break this damned silence? And why the fuck wouldn't he say anything?! Was he even a ''he'', to begin with? You tried to get up, but something kept you from lifting up your right leg.

- W-wait... Chains? H-hey, why am I-

Before you could even finish your sentence, a long, frightful laugh echoed through the whole place. It was a rasping voice, as if he inhaled pure air and blew thick clouds of smoke. The man suddenly stopped laughing before heading towards you, the weak light slowly revealing his facial features. You shut your eyes as thightly as you could before feeling your body being lifted up, as unbearable pain spreaded from your arm to your ribs. You could feel the cold, crushing grasp of the man or your already badly bruised wrist, as well as the humidity and disgusting heat of his breath on your face. 

- For saving you? Are you fucking kidding me?!

His words sounded like they were distorted, as if he couldn't speak properly. He let out a loud, mocking chuckle before letting go of your hand as your kept your head low, in shock, staring at the ground. He walked towards the door and opened it before turning back to you.

- I didn't save you from anything, doll. You just fell deeper into the rabbit's hole.

And with these last words, he walked away before shutting the door behind him.
IT'S FINALLY DONE OHMYGOOOD! Cannotevenplz 
Holy crap, I'm so sorry I took so long to update this story! ;o; Bad stuff happened.

Chapter I : fav.me/d6sk645
Prologue : fav.me/d6sk5cw
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Kittandragon Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
.....no id be safe in a rabbits hole, as for your damned chain here...pfft -shifts into a dragon, breaking the chain before shift back, my feline features clearly visable (the canine teeth, ears, tail, and eyes)- its a pathetic attempt to restrain me. -conjures up something to eat- hmph. dont mess with a magic user, let alone a powerful one.
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:iconrainbowfactorymurder:
Fuck you, Jeff. Just fucking kill me or don't kill me, you ass.
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crazydrinkingmayo Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Student Artist
ERMERGED I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER IT'S SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD AAAGGHHHH!!!!!!! *faints*
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Kittandragon Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
-hugs-
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InfraredPhoenix Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Student General Artist
Kyaaaaaa. Im really starting to like this style
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AnBlonde Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
More please and thank you.
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Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
WHERES THE NEXT FUCKING CHAPTERRRR
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*dies*
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Jeffythekiller123 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014   Traditional Artist
Is there another part??
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lobospade Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Artist
Im scared now...˚_˚‖
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Kittandragon Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
-pats- its alright. im here with ya. -shifts into a tiny dragon and crawls up onto your shoulder- you hungry at all..?
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lobospade Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015  Student Artist
*stares* .............OMG A TINY DRAGON!!!!!!!! *sets you down on a chair*
LOOK!! *shift into a dog size dragon* I can do that too!!! And yes I'm hungry, want pizza or something?
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Kittandragon Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
-giggles- you wanting pizza? -summons a freshly baked pizza- unlike Mr.White whom is gonna be a bitch, i atleast enjoy fresh things =^~^=
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lobospade Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Student Artist
*stuff face in pizza* who oath Mr. Whitbfdhd?
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Kittandragon Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
..Jeff
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lobospade Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Student Artist
Oh,
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Kittandragon Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
-sigh-
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vampirelover247 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Artist
I love it ^.^ make the next chapter pretty please
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athena185 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wait what hppened where is this person
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Lovely-Slaughter Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, maaaaybe you'll learn it in the next chapter!
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athena185 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
maybe i wil
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Terror6565 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
i L.O.V.E it!
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Lovely-Slaughter Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! >v<
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InsanityGlasses Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aww yea i like this Squee! 
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Lovely-Slaughter Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it! ; v ;
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lovejeffthekiller100 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Artist

its good

 

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Lovely-Slaughter Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Why, thank you~
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lovejeffthekiller100 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Student Artist
Your wlcome
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demonpaw78 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ERMERGAWSH! Amazing!
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Lovely-Slaughter Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it! ; v ;
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